Can't tell, because I had none of the files, and you didn't provide a rendered version (mp3 for example). I could replace them, but then I will never know how you wanted it to sound. Get replacing or rendering, and share it with us :) Posted by: Jernemies  on 2012-11-01 15:56:04

sry i can export and upload it but i dont know how where should i upload that :D:D Posted by: scutro  on 2012-11-01 16:56:35

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3bdQzFlpSxc&feature=plcp - here you can watch and say what am i doing bad :D Posted by: scutro  on 2012-11-01 17:08:49

It's pretty interesting, It's good being one of your first songs (assuming it is):) But let's go hunt down the "bad" things here. <br> <br>First of all, there's not many melodic instruments/synthes. All I can hear is a cheap sample, and the rest is percussion or voice samples. Try having at least 2 or 3 melodic instruments in one song (Like bass, synth, and synth strings). <br>The second thing would be making your own synthes, and getting familiar with different ways of doing so. Open LMMS and look left. On the sidebar you see, click the sheet with a star. It will be useful. For making your own, get familiar with this: http://lmms.sourceforge.net/lsp/index.php?action=show&file=2673 <br>But hey, it's a nice start :D Posted by: Jernemies  on 2012-11-02 12:10:17