Good work, but there's some problems. Most of this is personal feelings, so don't take all of my criticizing seriously; do what you want :) 1. Too many pauses. I feel like I'm being jerked when I'm listening to this. 2. The tempo speed-up part is off-key on the 1/4 notes. 3. That breathe effect is kind of annoying. I would get rid of it entirely. Posted by: Etorna_Z  on 2017-02-08 01:47:39

Thanks David :D The pauses thing is something I've commonly been experimenting with from the beginning because I was thinking those spaces will allow the vocals to keep a stronger hold on the listener's ear, but I use too much of it :p I didn't understand which part is off key? Is it the song or an instrument? And the breathe sample. Well, I hate to admit but I can't really visualize samples so I added that as an afterthought along with the reversed sample of "bass!" cut short and reversed to make it sound like "Yeah" to give the song more substance. And I don't really think playing with samples is what LMMS is built for, but granted, that breath is shit annoying :p Posted by: Madman_ac  on 2017-02-08 01:58:49

The off-key part is where the tempo changes from 80 to 108. If you open up the TripleOSC's notes that are playing those are the ones. Posted by: Etorna_Z  on 2017-02-08 02:40:32

Oh that was intentional, sorry :p Posted by: Madman_ac  on 2017-02-08 10:54:45

this is good like jazz vibe, 5 stars, good lmms musician Posted by: lgbt  on 2017-02-08 19:17:58