This is very impressive, especially since they're all Kicker!
While this doesn't really apply to this song, I decided this would be the best place to post it, to increase the chances of you seeing it. I think this comment may be quite helpful to you. There is a composer named Muzzy, who composes music for Monstercat, a very famous music company (I'm not sure whether "company" is the right word, but whatever). You can listen to Monstercat's songs for free on Soundcloud. As soon as I started listening to Muzzy's music, I thought of you immediately. While he obviously is much better than you (sorry), I noticed that both of you have a very similar song structure, and I believe that as long as you analyze his music, you have the potential to become just as good, or even better than Muzzy himself!
I suggest listening to "Muzzy - Spectrum", "Snails & Pegboard Nerds - Deep In The Night (Muzzy Remix)", and "Muzzy - Crescendo (feat. MYLK)".
The links are https://soundcloud.com/muzzydnb/snails-pegboard-nerds-deep-in-the-night-muzzy-remix, https://soundcloud.com/monstercat/muzzy-crescendo, and https://soundcloud.com/monstercat/muzzy-spectrum.
Please reply to this comment so I know it got to you! If you don't, I will post this comment on every song you compose from now on because I'm evil. >=D
Hopefully this helps you become a better composer!
Sincerely, Douglas (Used LMMS for three years five hours every day, devoted UNFA fan, heard literally every song you've ever made start-to-finish)Posted by: Douglas on 2017-04-08 18:58:36