Few things I have to say : 1.Its better to have an instrument (like 3osc with only one sine wave) for peak controller. The kick isnt the best option since it is not perfect. You can see for yourself in the FX Mixer that it kinda lags. 2.The main melody is built that it does not fit perfectly into a 4/4 song. This one does since it eliminates the space between the notes at the end + it cuts of a part. But then it is not as good as it could be. 3.The first "ZynAddSubFX" from the top is too harsh and it kinda does not fit in the song. 4.The snare and that weird clicking noise are too loud. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This song has some bad sides. But I gotta praise it for being one of the best songs on lsp for some time! It sounds surreal after hearing a crazy amount of bad songs here! Good job! 4/5* Posted by: Texxiliator  on 2018-01-19 17:04:55

@Texxiliator whatttt are you talking about theres plenty of good stuff here, people are always gonna post bad music, but how have you not heard a good song in 'some time', i've started posting again recently, are you saying my music is bad? if so i've heard nothing from you Posted by: XcaliburLord  on 2018-01-20 03:34:40

yooo this is sick btw Posted by: XcaliburLord  on 2018-01-20 04:52:35

Thanks for the constructive criticism @Texxiliator! I really appreciate your comment, it will help me learn to perfect my producing! @XcaliburLord Your music is lit! I just heard it and it sounds awesome! Posted by: Pasturm  on 2018-01-20 06:14:39

I like @Pavan Ravin music and not only here, this track also good! Be happy 👍 Posted by: gdd71  on 2018-01-20 06:37:36