Some good ideas in here but the mixing is just awful. The whole thing is just a distorted mess. Lets talk about the instrument layering. try to layer sounds with a purpose. To me this looks like you put new instrument layers in the song just for fun. The fourth (from top) 3xosc instrument is - in addition to being useless for the harmony - way too loud. It ruins the whole thing. The first 3xosc seems really weird. There's nothing interesting about the instrument. I like the electric_clav under it playing the same melody, but the 3xosc layer seems useless. The kick plays on a way too high register. It sounds really awkward. All the bass sounds are not low enough. They don't have that powerful low end feel. the snare is just weird and loud. Consider fixing it. Honestly this has the potential to be a 3 star project, but right now I could not give it more than 1 star, because it is just a mess. Posted by: Squatro  on 2018-12-13 01:34:02

I don't feel a awfull mix on my computer, the sound seems really clean, but i'd really like some mastering tips, if you could show me how to fix or maybe your computer can't follow all this mess. Tks Posted by: acemil  on 2018-12-13 18:45:55

Export this track and upload it to soundcloud or somewhere I can listen to it. I can hear accurately and without distortion the tracks of people who I know are skilled producers Posted by: Squatro  on 2018-12-14 02:09:11