Not a full song, fair enough, but I'm still going to critique it.
Biggest problem: it is distorted. That kick sample you are using is wayy too loud in the mix. You should consider sidechaining it so it doesn't clash with the bass. Also the hihats are wayy too in-your-face ruining the second half ( if it wasn't already ruined by the kick drum)
Now something that Is, I guess, just a matter of taste. The lmms native effect samples are just awful. Don't use them. Try to make your own transition sounds with zyn or something. The "explode01" sample is just super awkward, and no joke made me laugh when I heard it.
Also maybe try to ease the listener in to the song a little bit. Don't hit us with the kick drum immediately. Maybe just have the pluck sound playing, and then later add more elements to go along with it. The kick and the bass are going to feel a lot more powerful when you contrast them with something more light.Posted by: Squatro on 2018-12-12 17:20:49