My First Project... Hope you guys like it .... I've kept it a little simple...
1. Your song is distorted
"Clipping is a form of distortion where the amplitude of the waveform
is attempting to be so large it runs out of room and pushes against
the extreme edges of available sampling space
(referred to in digital audio terms as '0dB').
Because it has nowhere to go the waveform is flattened out at the peak
of the amplitude in a hard line until the amplitude lowers again and
resumes its normal curve.(...)
Both the hard line and the fact that there is a tight little corner
bent into the shape of the waveform contribute to audible distortion. "
ELI5 version: Your instruments are too loud and it makes your song sound doo-doo"
LINKS FOR MIXING TOOLS AND HOW TO USE THEM:
About equalizing: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o6sqfYBIYVg
Spectrum analyzer: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ssdve3JemZE
2. The structure of your song is a little weird
"You might think that you're being innovative or something and that you want to break boundaries,
but in reality even music has some rules..."
MODELS FOR DIFFERENT SONG STRUCTURES
My last advice would be this: listen to some of your favorite artists and analyze how their song is constructed.
This song doesn't really resemble any kind of music I've heard of before. It's a bit of a mess If I'm going to be 100% honest.
Also search for some of the top rated projects on this site and see how other artist construct their songs.
I will link some good LMMS artist for you to check out: