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by BRENDON (BJDJ)
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License: Creative Commons (by)
LMMS Version: 1.2.0-rc7
Submitted: 2019-03-09 12:22:55
Updated: 2019-03-09 12:22:55
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Name: PRODOJO 2.mmpz Download
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The melody is very cheery, and somewhat childish, I don't think it suits the hip hop style perhaps, but I'm no hip hop guy. The buildup with the kick drum is just terrible, at bar 17 everything is just a big clip. The melody is very simple, it doesn't make it better because it's on 3 tracks in parallel. The Triple Oscillator bass is also strange. Bass isn't just a couple of alternating notes with a very very deep sine wave. Sure, it makes the walls tremble if you have a good subwoofer, but imo the bass should have some connection to what's going on in the rest of the song as far as harmony...

You were going somewhere with BEAT 4... nice start, catchy tune, but then the bass is just random there too.

My advice to you is: practice on chords. Make a song, figure out what the chords are. Or take some chords and make a song. And then stick to the chords. At least till you figure it out. Don't just trow around random notes.

And when you are writing the bass notes, tune up the bass 2 octaves so you can listen to it together with the melody and make sure it makes sense.Posted by: NiftySardine on 2019-03-12 11:40:34
Sorry I replied so late, thank you for the tips and I have done my best to improve:)
Posted by: BJDJ on 2019-04-24 01:13:13
I hope you like my new PROJODO 2 TRAP REMIX , I really worked on improving it....:)
Posted by: BJDJ on 2019-04-24 01:23:07
I hope you like my new PROJODO 2 TRAP REMIX , I really worked on improving it....:)
Posted by: BJDJ on 2019-04-24 01:23:31