Yea, it's not bad. I, as a fan of "percussive and futuristic" tracks, like this. However, what's the deal with the thunder at the end? If that is the ending, I'm disappointed. Also, it's not a whole lot of hearing right now. If you're gonna work on it to make it better and longer, I'd like to hear it. Otherwise pretty nice. Posted by: Jernemies  on 2011-09-24 15:07:02

Thanks Jere (Jernemies) This was fun to do, and I am still going to work on it, add some time, and do something with the thunder. The thunder was a last minute thing, and there was something at the time that I liked about it. My intention was to through some more stuff on top of that, and fade back in to end it on a better note. But I understand now that I think about it. I'm glad someone critiqued it, so thanks. The thunder is not captivating or interesting at all, but I want a part that is rather strange and not beat oriented for that part, then fade back in to a nice warm colorful drum finally. Peace :D Posted by: spyder3  on 2011-09-24 23:29:39