My dude! This is really good! Nice arrangement and melodies. Only thing i noticed that seems a little off is the last chord of the progression. Looks like the bass isn't following the last two chords exactly, which sounds okay on the second to last chord bc it's a commonly used slash chord (Eb over Bb). Of course maybe you meant to do this idk (music is subjective after all). But if you want to change it, you could make the last note of the bass B flat. You could also make the second to last one E flat if you want the bass to follow the chords exactly. Then if you make those edits, the melody might sound off, so maybe you'll want to play around with that. Other than that tho, i think it's a major vibe! I especially like the fancy little tom fill. Hope this helps! Posted by: Cloud/Nine  on 2026-02-15 23:44:55

Hey, thank you so much for your honest feedback, really brightened up my evening a bit that someone liked my song. Whenever I upload this to YouTube, I will implement your tips! Posted by: mQrak  on 2026-02-16 21:44:48