Going right to my harsh opinion (If you liked this song, read at your own risk),
It's very loud, and has many "transition"-parts - which makes it very confusing to listen. OK, throwing in a fast lookahead limiter is not a big deal by me, and I can just make it loop between panels 9 and 16. But still leaves a feeling that this name should be used in some other song Dx. There's room for improvement, E.G drums could be varied, bass could be more quiet, the song could be longer, there could be a lead, and the unnecessary transitions could be removed (deleting panels 3 and 4 did the trick).
All in all, I've seen better from you =( - but you have the skills to do better, or improve this one. At least, that's what I've seen =) (Sorry for being harsh, but IMO you really are better than this).Posted by: Jernemies on 2012-05-01 09:45:49
Could be better, but I kinda like.Posted by: Yure16 on 2012-05-03 17:12:01