Good job.Posted by: stuarttw on 2013-05-30 21:56:37

Not a bad song, by any means. Honestly, it's so simple that saying anything particularly good or bad is impossible, but I'll try anyway :D. I guess the biggest problems are the chords being basically the same, just on different root notes, and having a bit odd chord progression in the second and third parts (part as in 8 measures).
Although it's so simple, I'd almost take that it's some kind of experiment. A little tip: Variate the chords a little, that's not really an uncommon trick in house music. All the chords here are minor. You could make it to go, for example, in the first part from minor to sus4 and back to minor (if you're not sure what am I talking about, LMMS from 0.4.13 onwards has the list of chords in the upper-right corner of piano roll).
But I'm just a listener, the song is yours after all. Just some suggestions.Posted by: Jernemies on 2013-05-31 17:05:51

gud:) may I remix?
Posted by: Zeb on 2013-06-03 19:07:19