Sounds considerably fuller and a bit more balanced than your earlier work; you have indeed improved :). This could use a bass instrument to complement the drum section. The hihat is too much on the foreground for my taste, you could reduce the volume or even make it more subtle using a high-pass filter. The ending sounds a bit random now, you could add an extra A tone at the end to "finish it off". At any rate, keep it up, you're going in the right direction! Hope my thoughts are of any help :) Posted by: Fastigium  on 2014-11-16 11:23:41

I'll try to play with the high-pass filter so I can get used to what it does, and I can see what you mean about an A at the end... I really appreciate all the feedback. :) Posted by: Clockwork  on 2014-11-16 12:05:25